Writing the Personal Statement
Writing the Statement
Introduction
You'll want to catch the reader's attention immediately. Remember, program directors read hundreds of personal statements .you don't want them to skim yours! Try to start off your statement with a story that will grab the reader's attention. Ideally, this story will explain why you've chosen a particular specialty, or will show off some of your skills, knowledge, or beliefs. By beginning the essay with a story, the reader will be drawn into the statement and inspired to read more closely. Be careful though --don't start off with a quote, or by explaining why you wanted to become a doctor --as a medical graduate, program directors will be expecting more from you! Use the introduction to showcase your talents and experiences.
Discuss the specialty you've chosen
Program directors want a resident who will be loyal to the field he or she has selected. You really have to discuss your choice of specialty. Tell a story that shows your passion for the specialty, or explain what made you decide to specialize in that field. Try to start off your statement with a story that shows off your skills in or enthusiasm for your selected specialty. And if you're looking to switch specialties --for example, if you worked as an obstetrician and now are applying for an internal medicine residency --you'll need to discuss the reasons for that choice. Don't make the mistake of ignoring your background --explain why you've chosen to switch specialties, what your experience has taught you, and how it has prepared you for this new field. Although you may have applied for several specialties, your job is to make the reader feel that the specialty you have applied for is your calling. You have to convince the reader that you'll love doing your job ...and that you'll do a good job, too.
Prove it!
When writing your statement, remember that it's a good idea to show, and not just to tell. Back up what you say with specific examples. Did you learn diligence in medical school? Did research experience familiarize you with medical technology? Did your clinical rotations teach you compassion? Are you naturally an understanding individual? Did your patients feel comfortable talking to you? Now is your chance to show your personality to the directors --let them know why you are their best candidate.
Ultimately, the most memorable part of your statement is the stories you'll tell. Don't just say, "I really love children and they like me too," say, "When doing my rotations, I found that the children in the oncology ward seemed to gravitate towards me. I did my best to bring some happiness --and not just medication! --into their day." Don't write, "I am a diligent and hard worker," explain that, "Despite the fact that my classes in medical school were so challenging, I pulled quite a few all-nighters and spent much of my free time studying, and graduated first in my class." Tell stories or provide examples that showcase your best qualities. Try to think of the qualities that a good doctor needs, and show the reader how you fit the qualifications.
Sell yourself
The personal statement is a chance for you to show off your skills and strengths. Focus on the positive. What makes you a better candidate than any other applicant? Don't discuss your weaknesses, unless you really feel that it is necessary. Even then, try to show how the challenges you've faced have shaped you and helped you grow. For example, if you failed the USMLE on your first attempt, use that as a springboard to discuss your perseverance and determination to succeed.
The Conclusion. Personalizing Your Statement
Let the reader know what you're looking for in a residency program, and why you think their program fits the bill. Are you looking for a residency program with research opportunities? Do you want to practice family medicine in an urban setting? Are you seeking a program with a reputation for academic excellence? Make the program director feel like you're looking for a program exactly like theirs, and not just willing to settle for any residency program. Briefly reiterate why it is that you'll make the ideal resident, and why it is that you're the best candidate they have.
And, of course,
Stay professional. Don't try using writing gimmicks or strange set-ups or formats. Make sure that your grammar and spelling are impeccable, and double check all of your documents for typos. (As an IMG, it is essential that you establish yourself as fluent in English --don't let a careless error ruin your chances at a residency slot!)
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